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Melody Grace  
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Dabblin'

Journal Entry: Sun Apr 6, 2008, 5:23 AM
Okay, so I've been dabbling in music composition a bit. Just some self taught self, and I figure'd I'd see how crappy it is by posting a link to my newest ' piece'.


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BE HARSH!

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*Arcalian:iconArcalian: Apr 6, 2008, 7:07:26 PM
I'm not qualified as a music critic, and I don't enjoy being "Harsh" unless I really dislike a piece. But I'll be honest.

You say you're dabbling, and it shows; the piece is technically sound, but doesn't seem to do anything. It sounds like the piece is building towards something, but never gets there.

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Someone on DArt told me not to take myself seriously. But if you don't take yourself seriously, then who else will?

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~Kalapixie:iconKalapixie: Apr 6, 2008, 11:12:27 PM
Honesty is always good. Danke.
~Kalapixie:iconKalapixie: Apr 6, 2008, 11:25:38 PM
We really need an edit comment button, Anyways. I only did it because I liked the main chorus, I thought of it in a head and put it into musicka. The rest of it didn't quite matter so much. It shows.

Kayla.
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